I can't tell you how happy I was to receive your letter. Reading it was so like chatting with you over the anvil, it brought a smile to my face. The pages even have that slightly fermented fleshy smell and the mysterious little stains -- it really brings me back.
I'd love to spend more words congratulating you on your new career and telling you all about the opportunities that working for Naughty Secrets have opened up for me, but I know your friend must be on a deadline, so this letter will have to be brief. I've enclosed the original notes with my comments in blue ink. On the whole I think it is a viable design, but on the other hand I haven't done much work on projects of a comparable scale before. I appended a few pages with alternate possibilities for some of the components. Hope your friend understands my Thalassian.
One final note: I do hope you are not planning to claim my work here as your own. I'm fairly confident you wouldn't, knowing that I would sue you with the force of a thousand Penances if you did, but it never hurts to make sure, does it?
With warmest affection,